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Excerpt from Chapter 2. Fist Full of Edits
Rene reaped the benefits in many ways from my earlier encounter with Debbie. I gazed down lovingly at Rene’s sweet heart shaped rump while I drove and angled deep into her. Yet my mind wandered. Thoughts of what Debbie's tiny olive hued derriere would look like in this pose would arise. Sure Debbie’s shorter stature might make this a more challenging encounter, but it could offer new angles as well. The thought just made me harder. As my hands reached around to cup Rene’s small breasts I couldn't help but muse what it would be like to have Debbie's enormous melons in my mitts. But then I would see Rene’s beautiful blond mane spread across her back and the dusky Debbie would fade from my thoughts.
Interesting to have the two females like this one right infront of him and the other in his mind.
ReplyDeleteHe is indulging in a "is the grass greener on the other side" moment.
DeleteYeah. I bet Rene wouldn't be pleased to know what's running through his mind just then... or who's running through his mind naked. :D
ReplyDeleteThanks for sharing, nice to meetcha
Or who or what is running through Rene's mind either.
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